Sunday, March 21, 2010

My Burdened Existence



It is still lingering in my mind - the shadow of my past,
Perishing me and my existence in to a deep chasm.
In every moment of the present, I feel the chasing of those footsteps-
Haunting my dreams and my imaginations.
It creeps to hold me back, to freeze the old clock.
I try to escape and I try to run,
by wading my way through the snow,
only makes my foot entangle in it more.
Screams of my inner voices,
instigate me to listen harder,
my senses go numb and there I wait at the starting point again.
How long will I hold this coldness?
What else I have to give up for it?
Do I have anyone to question, when my own soul is missing to answer?
-Hiding in the dark shadows from my own existence-
My burdened existence,
My incomplete self,
rests heavy on my heart and soul,
And there lies no place here, where I can find peace.

5 comments:

  1. great work..a lil dificlt to understand bt its adorable.keep it up!stay kool!

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  2. yet another masterpiece (what else i may expect from you)! Great words with great meaning... Beautiful! keep it up.. :) - Billz

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  3. Great poem am:-) felt so compelled to read on, i was drawn in. Very cool !

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  4. Wonderful Amz...truly wonderful.
    Lots of emotions flowing throughout the poem......so very beautifully expressed, keep the good work up girl :)

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  5. wow...............gr8

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Everyone needs a place in their life where they can go to escape the demands of family and work, enjoy some adult time and be free from the daily grind. Psychologists call it ‘the third space’ because most people spend the majority of their lives in two places – home and work. A third space provides a haven from these places of responsibility, where we can chill out and indulge our leisure interests. For me, my third space is my blog. It is without doubt the most important part of my world.

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Sunday, March 21, 2010

My Burdened Existence



It is still lingering in my mind - the shadow of my past,
Perishing me and my existence in to a deep chasm.
In every moment of the present, I feel the chasing of those footsteps-
Haunting my dreams and my imaginations.
It creeps to hold me back, to freeze the old clock.
I try to escape and I try to run,
by wading my way through the snow,
only makes my foot entangle in it more.
Screams of my inner voices,
instigate me to listen harder,
my senses go numb and there I wait at the starting point again.
How long will I hold this coldness?
What else I have to give up for it?
Do I have anyone to question, when my own soul is missing to answer?
-Hiding in the dark shadows from my own existence-
My burdened existence,
My incomplete self,
rests heavy on my heart and soul,
And there lies no place here, where I can find peace.

5 comments:

  1. great work..a lil dificlt to understand bt its adorable.keep it up!stay kool!

    ReplyDelete
  2. yet another masterpiece (what else i may expect from you)! Great words with great meaning... Beautiful! keep it up.. :) - Billz

    ReplyDelete
  3. Great poem am:-) felt so compelled to read on, i was drawn in. Very cool !

    ReplyDelete
  4. Wonderful Amz...truly wonderful.
    Lots of emotions flowing throughout the poem......so very beautifully expressed, keep the good work up girl :)

    ReplyDelete
  5. wow...............gr8

    ReplyDelete

Thanks a bunch to all the readers and comment writers!!

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