Wednesday, December 30, 2009

The Real Love ; a mother and a child

That in arms of her slumbers,
is no one but a shade of her and all that she remembers.
Pangs and pains she saw;
for this moment to be in awe.
Life has been bestowed by HIM, no wonder;
but why is that HE chose her for this can be no blunder.
Wrapping her arms around;
exhibiting the warmth that heavens bound.
The little one smiles to adore
O angel figure! who sent you to me bore?



Once again arms in arms they lie,
difference being who carries and who sighs.
You gave me life, so how is it you say byes?
Questioning his tearful eyes.
Years and years of his cuddle, now in his lap lies!

21 comments:

  1. Hello Amna,

    I came around your page as lonely wanderer in search of some nice poetry websites..honestly speaking i'm overhelmed by the depth of language and strong imagination of your poetry, it really touched my heart and mind. While reading your poems i felt swept away by the way your prose turns poetry..from begining till the end your poems are just wonderful pieces of art, not painted, written though! As a poet my self I know what it takes to paint down your imaginations into words..I see a born writer in you and wish you a great name in the field of english literature. Wish u luck and keep it up! Waiting to read more of you..

    AB Muhamed

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  2. all da poetic stuff is fantabolus being in a initial stage an nw da period of success an joy is on itz way so rock da world wid ur creations.an all da 3 r awesme bt The Real Love really touch ma heart an ma wishes r wid u soo go on an on...........:)

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  3. Having read your poems before i can surely say that you are best at igniting emotions and feelings that lie deep inside of a human's heart and this is such a beautiful portrayal of your thoughts for a mother which is a divinely figure.
    no wonder it came from you , one of your best poems so far, mano

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  4. Amna i must say this is an amazing poem, full of emotions and also beautifully written. It literally made my eyes wet as i can relate it to my real life. I was not into poetry but i will definitely look forward to your other poems.
    Goodluck!

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  5. In search of someone who can make me feel my natal loneliness is no longer only mine.Why am i clutched by the hands of gloom in this world?The only answer for my curiosity is wonderfully given by passing thro th words full of pearls 4rm u.Amna u hv intensily depicted th true wisdom which i can happily say it's not only urs.It's a voice 4rm my heart too...In short an exquisite combination of gems from all over th universe!!!

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  6. ahh,,, so sweet n touching..Love it..!!uve put all da reality 2gethr n came up wit smthng tat is BEAUTIFUL... I see the beauty of ur soul in ur work.. cant wait to read more.. keep rocking..!!

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  7. you are right mariam its the beauty of her soul depicted clearly in her words

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  8. nice peom..a poem which u can picture in ur mind:)

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  9. Hi Amna
    I read your poem and as I am not very good with words I do not know how to express my fancy to your poem. I can just say that it is one of the best poems I have ever read!

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  10. Incredible! I am impressed to see such a talent in our country. Honestly!

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  11. The poem is full of emotions and feelings. However I have noticed that most of your poems are short and meaningful. Still good efforts, keep going!

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  12. Such a touching poem Amna, so full of heart. Very good!

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  13. ohh i m really impressed from u Amna such a nice poem i see the beatuti of ur soul in ur work.its was so loving ...really gud keep it up

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  14. Good efforts but I can see the spark in you to do even better than this. Write a longer poem in future.
    Bravo!

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  15. wow you made us all proud. I am impressed and glad to have come accross this poems.

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  16. Yar i have been trough aLL of ur poems nd i cant say anythin accept awesome nd i dont no much abt dis poetry stuff but i do know dis dat i havent seen poetry like dis in my life.It has touched my heart deep.

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  17. Amna, I am glad I got the opportunity to go throuth these fantastic creations. Looking forward to more.
    SIDRA JAN

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  18. u know sumtin....most ov thez poetries n stuff just go FLYIN above ma head....but tell u wat....wat u've written iz sumtin very simple yet very deep....n nt only dat im gettin evry bit ov it,but " IM LOVIN' IT"

    n this part iz so beautifully constructed...


    Life has been bestowed by HIM, no wonder;
    but why is that HE chose her for this can be no blunder


    awesome.............

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  19. Love it!!

    The poem is well constructed!

    Cheers

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  20. hey gr8 work,A Real Love z js outstandng,lovly..Hope nicly writen.. An oucast no doubt ur masterpiece:)keep it up.. waing 2 read more.Best wishes!!

    ReplyDelete

Thanks a bunch to all the readers and comment writers!!

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Wednesday, December 30, 2009

The Real Love ; a mother and a child

That in arms of her slumbers,
is no one but a shade of her and all that she remembers.
Pangs and pains she saw;
for this moment to be in awe.
Life has been bestowed by HIM, no wonder;
but why is that HE chose her for this can be no blunder.
Wrapping her arms around;
exhibiting the warmth that heavens bound.
The little one smiles to adore
O angel figure! who sent you to me bore?



Once again arms in arms they lie,
difference being who carries and who sighs.
You gave me life, so how is it you say byes?
Questioning his tearful eyes.
Years and years of his cuddle, now in his lap lies!

21 comments:

  1. Hello Amna,

    I came around your page as lonely wanderer in search of some nice poetry websites..honestly speaking i'm overhelmed by the depth of language and strong imagination of your poetry, it really touched my heart and mind. While reading your poems i felt swept away by the way your prose turns poetry..from begining till the end your poems are just wonderful pieces of art, not painted, written though! As a poet my self I know what it takes to paint down your imaginations into words..I see a born writer in you and wish you a great name in the field of english literature. Wish u luck and keep it up! Waiting to read more of you..

    AB Muhamed

    ReplyDelete
  2. all da poetic stuff is fantabolus being in a initial stage an nw da period of success an joy is on itz way so rock da world wid ur creations.an all da 3 r awesme bt The Real Love really touch ma heart an ma wishes r wid u soo go on an on...........:)

    ReplyDelete
  3. Having read your poems before i can surely say that you are best at igniting emotions and feelings that lie deep inside of a human's heart and this is such a beautiful portrayal of your thoughts for a mother which is a divinely figure.
    no wonder it came from you , one of your best poems so far, mano

    ReplyDelete
  4. Amna i must say this is an amazing poem, full of emotions and also beautifully written. It literally made my eyes wet as i can relate it to my real life. I was not into poetry but i will definitely look forward to your other poems.
    Goodluck!

    ReplyDelete
  5. In search of someone who can make me feel my natal loneliness is no longer only mine.Why am i clutched by the hands of gloom in this world?The only answer for my curiosity is wonderfully given by passing thro th words full of pearls 4rm u.Amna u hv intensily depicted th true wisdom which i can happily say it's not only urs.It's a voice 4rm my heart too...In short an exquisite combination of gems from all over th universe!!!

    ReplyDelete
  6. ahh,,, so sweet n touching..Love it..!!uve put all da reality 2gethr n came up wit smthng tat is BEAUTIFUL... I see the beauty of ur soul in ur work.. cant wait to read more.. keep rocking..!!

    ReplyDelete
  7. you are right mariam its the beauty of her soul depicted clearly in her words

    ReplyDelete
  8. nice peom..a poem which u can picture in ur mind:)

    ReplyDelete
  9. Hi Amna
    I read your poem and as I am not very good with words I do not know how to express my fancy to your poem. I can just say that it is one of the best poems I have ever read!

    ReplyDelete
  10. Incredible! I am impressed to see such a talent in our country. Honestly!

    ReplyDelete
  11. The poem is full of emotions and feelings. However I have noticed that most of your poems are short and meaningful. Still good efforts, keep going!

    ReplyDelete
  12. Such a touching poem Amna, so full of heart. Very good!

    ReplyDelete
  13. ohh i m really impressed from u Amna such a nice poem i see the beatuti of ur soul in ur work.its was so loving ...really gud keep it up

    ReplyDelete
  14. Good efforts but I can see the spark in you to do even better than this. Write a longer poem in future.
    Bravo!

    ReplyDelete
  15. wow you made us all proud. I am impressed and glad to have come accross this poems.

    ReplyDelete
  16. Yar i have been trough aLL of ur poems nd i cant say anythin accept awesome nd i dont no much abt dis poetry stuff but i do know dis dat i havent seen poetry like dis in my life.It has touched my heart deep.

    ReplyDelete
  17. Amna, I am glad I got the opportunity to go throuth these fantastic creations. Looking forward to more.
    SIDRA JAN

    ReplyDelete
  18. u know sumtin....most ov thez poetries n stuff just go FLYIN above ma head....but tell u wat....wat u've written iz sumtin very simple yet very deep....n nt only dat im gettin evry bit ov it,but " IM LOVIN' IT"

    n this part iz so beautifully constructed...


    Life has been bestowed by HIM, no wonder;
    but why is that HE chose her for this can be no blunder


    awesome.............

    ReplyDelete
  19. Love it!!

    The poem is well constructed!

    Cheers

    ReplyDelete
  20. hey gr8 work,A Real Love z js outstandng,lovly..Hope nicly writen.. An oucast no doubt ur masterpiece:)keep it up.. waing 2 read more.Best wishes!!

    ReplyDelete

Thanks a bunch to all the readers and comment writers!!

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