Wednesday, December 23, 2009

AN OUTCAST

From tree to tree the eagle flies,
In quest of warmth, to stay by.
The fire flickers a distance away,
But it is nothing when the bird comes array.
Swooping high, it holds its breath;
Thinking twice, when it just once had to think.
Not in proximity to life;
It wonders to see a better day ahead.
The bird breaks its wings;
This was the only hope to keep it within the ring.
Sensing joys and sorrows are a part of existence,
It continues now by search through walk in the smooth ocean.

10 comments:

  1. Hello Again, :)

    Very nicely written, very poetic, very strong imaginations...all qualities of a born writer...ending words are marvellous.

    "Sensing Joys and Sorrows are a part of existence.. It continues now by search through walk in the smooth ocean"

    AB Muhamed

    p.s. waiting to read more of your art!

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  2. hi mam its nice to see ur site,ur attempt is really appreciable n hope that u make it more interesting,by reading ur poems v can tune our mind n new ideas comes to our mind ,v really miss u alot n proud to be ur students take good care of urself n remember me.

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  3. didnt i comment on it already.........!!! :(
    or may b it wuz on dat oda site chicken karahi in english :P

    nywayz herez a comment

    this poem iz so beautifully written...n ma fav part ov it iz

    Not in proximity to life;
    It wonders to see a better day ahead

    dat duznt mean i dn live in proximity ov life or sumtin ,but it jus touched ma feelinz ;)

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  4. Hi Amna
    I'm struck by the profundity of your poetic expression...Your grip on language is too good to be true:)... the syllables are so enchanting and dextrous burnished in heart touching theme.Goodshow!!!!!
    Best wishes
    Paras Ali

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  5. this z such a ny tot... & itz creative... short & interesting...

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  6. i am new here bt i read ur poetry nd nice one pl can u send me ur poems ?

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  7. great stuff buddy and much more intereting then the poems i read in my english books

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  8. wow u rocks ..
    i thought u r coping nd pasting over here bt am wrong ur true writer.. keep stugling one day u will find out ur way to fame :)

    best ov Luck ..

    regards

    == BLACK ===

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Thanks a bunch to all the readers and comment writers!!

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Wednesday, December 23, 2009

AN OUTCAST

From tree to tree the eagle flies,
In quest of warmth, to stay by.
The fire flickers a distance away,
But it is nothing when the bird comes array.
Swooping high, it holds its breath;
Thinking twice, when it just once had to think.
Not in proximity to life;
It wonders to see a better day ahead.
The bird breaks its wings;
This was the only hope to keep it within the ring.
Sensing joys and sorrows are a part of existence,
It continues now by search through walk in the smooth ocean.

10 comments:

  1. Hello Again, :)

    Very nicely written, very poetic, very strong imaginations...all qualities of a born writer...ending words are marvellous.

    "Sensing Joys and Sorrows are a part of existence.. It continues now by search through walk in the smooth ocean"

    AB Muhamed

    p.s. waiting to read more of your art!

    ReplyDelete
  2. hi mam its nice to see ur site,ur attempt is really appreciable n hope that u make it more interesting,by reading ur poems v can tune our mind n new ideas comes to our mind ,v really miss u alot n proud to be ur students take good care of urself n remember me.

    ReplyDelete
  3. didnt i comment on it already.........!!! :(
    or may b it wuz on dat oda site chicken karahi in english :P

    nywayz herez a comment

    this poem iz so beautifully written...n ma fav part ov it iz

    Not in proximity to life;
    It wonders to see a better day ahead

    dat duznt mean i dn live in proximity ov life or sumtin ,but it jus touched ma feelinz ;)

    ReplyDelete
  4. Hi Amna
    I'm struck by the profundity of your poetic expression...Your grip on language is too good to be true:)... the syllables are so enchanting and dextrous burnished in heart touching theme.Goodshow!!!!!
    Best wishes
    Paras Ali

    ReplyDelete
  5. this z such a ny tot... & itz creative... short & interesting...

    ReplyDelete
  6. i am new here bt i read ur poetry nd nice one pl can u send me ur poems ?

    ReplyDelete
  7. great stuff buddy and much more intereting then the poems i read in my english books

    ReplyDelete
  8. wow u rocks ..
    i thought u r coping nd pasting over here bt am wrong ur true writer.. keep stugling one day u will find out ur way to fame :)

    best ov Luck ..

    regards

    == BLACK ===

    ReplyDelete

Thanks a bunch to all the readers and comment writers!!

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